10 Second Tip: Foreshadowing

[ookami_kasumi]

Foreshadowing is when the opening scene of a story is a kind of nutshell prophecy for the whole story.

Foreshadowing is when the opening scene of a story is a kind of nutshell prophecy for the whole story.

* In a Horror, this is when the originating Bad Thing happens.
* In a Mystery or Crime story, it's when the first victim is slain, and/or object (McGuffin) goes missing.
* In a Romance this is where the main character meets their soon-to-be lover for a fleeting but memorable moment.
* In a Sci-fi, this is where the ruling Theory is presented.
* In a Gothic, this is where the main character transforms into a monster for the first time.

This also reveals the Premise, or ruling argument that the story is trying to illustrate; what the story is trying to Prove.

• The results of Revenge
• The path of Ambition
• The reality of Love
• The pain of being Different


The Story
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The meat of the story should fulfill that prophecy using twists, turns, and surprises that compel the reader to Keep Reading to discover 'what's really going on?' Never forget: The readers DON'T want to see what's coming. They want to figure it out THEMSELVES.

However, if you intend to use (what looks like) chance and coincidence to move your plot you're going to need careful preparation. Using deus ex machina (situations, objects, and helpers that were just suddenly THERE without explanation,) is unacceptable. The author should NEVER pull a rabbit out of their hat simply to rescue their hero.

The trick is to put the plot element into your story EARLY without making the reader aware of its importance. Never telegraph your punches. Every choice made MUST seem logical for that character.


The Conclusion
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The last part is what that prophecy brought about--what happened BECAUSE of the events in the story.

* Were the guilty punished?
* Was the lost object or person found? Plus who did it and why?
* Did the lover gain the attention of their beloved?
* Was the scientific theory convincing? (Or horrifying enough?)
* Did the monster reconcile with their nature?

Always complete each circle you began. Solve EVERY problem presented, no matter how small. Any unsolved problems become Plot Holes your readers WILL notice and call you on. "Hey, whatever happened with...?"

The easiest way to do this is by keeping your Main cast SMALL.

* Hero
* Ally (buddy or lover)
* Villain

Side characters are those who occupy places in the story: the waitress, parents, coworkers, the beat cops..., but don't actually change anything. Main characters are the characters whose actions actually affect the plot.

The more Main characters you have, the more problems you add--which means the more story you have to write to solve those problems.

Enjoy!

Comments

[randrews25.livejournal.com]

I try to incorporate most of this in my writing, but sometimes its much harder than it seems.

Somebody suggest i write down the whole plot before writing. I tried it but it doesnt work because when i start to write, my brain twists the story in a different direction from what i had written down and the list becomes useless >.>

I need LOTS more practice!

[ookami-kasumi.livejournal.com]

FOCUS young Jedi...!
-- My stories ALWAYS deviate from my planned plot, but as long as I keep my point in mind--and my planned ending--it eventually wanders back to where it needs to go.

[randrews25.livejournal.com]

Point taken Obi-One xD (or is it Obiwan? I forget :P)
thanks :D

[ookami-kasumi.livejournal.com]

Glad I could help!
-- I think it's Obi-wan. Master will do. *wink*

[randrews25.livejournal.com]

'May the force be with you' :)